Integration of quotes using Barlcays Formula

Science is the what will determine our future, but unfortunately it is being attacked from multiple angles by, as physicist Mark B. Boslough says “those who twist legitimate multiculturalism by going way beyond.” Science is also being attacked by religion due to fundamentalists ignoring anything that is not backed up in the bible. There is … [Read more…]

Going Against the Grain

Integrating art into the STEM idea of learning is very unrealistic and feels unnecessary for being able to accomplish the American dream. That dream is the main goal for all Americans; they want to live a happy comfortable life with plenty of money. Art is just not as necessary in present day work due to … [Read more…]

Art is a Strong Part of Education

Yo Yo Ma is a very famous cellist and songwriter. He Is an Asian man that has won 27 Grammy’s from his strong work as a cellist. He is a well educated man that studied at the Juilliard School and a Harvard University graduate. The essay “Necessary Edges: Arts, Empathy and Education” was originally published … [Read more…]

Proper Quoting

Original:Joy is what I see as the opposite of suffering; the ultimate goal of living a happy life. It is a strong emotion that can dictate how your day goes. Now a days I see a prime part of suffering can be controlled. I empathize how the people suffering felt and realized that the help … [Read more…]

Revisions to my Essay

Original paragraph: I do understand the EA’s ultimate goal of ending all suffering and that should be a worldwide belief. The impact art has on the world is endless. Just 45 minutes of music buffered  my disliking of running and one piece of art changed my mindset of a class. The use of the 100,000 … [Read more…]