I feel like my essay wasn’t complete. I had a good start and thats the goal of a free draft a feel. My thesis wasn’t strong enough and didn’t make sense and didn’t back up my claims so I think that will be a good spot to start. All of my claims talk about the … [Read more…]
I want to use a couple different types of modes to elaborate what i am trying to say and all for the reader to see the point of my paper. I want to add some video of what I talk about. I talk about my sack I had and I want to put that in … [Read more…]
Essential question: How can football can be source of beauty in society? The community that impacted me the most this year was the football community. I always took the sports for advantage and never realized how special it really is. I focused more on football and realized there is all sorts of beauty to be … [Read more…]
I found an article called “The Math Behind Beauty” in Discover Magazine and it described how we all depend on beauty, but not everyone knows what it is. The main idea is that we all see beauty mainly in how we look and there is a “golden ratio” in how looks can make us beautiful. Dr. … [Read more…]
John Armstrong, a philosopher, wrote the essay “La bella vita”. He stated “To regard beauty as a luxury adornment or a social signifier was to miss the true potential of the experience.” He is inferring that people are getting these “beautiful” items for social status and it isn’t needed; it is considered a luxury item. … [Read more…]
What I fixed: I read chapter 8 from They Say, I Say and it was about connecting the parts. There were areas in my paper when I wasnt precise enough and I read that I needed to connect the part by being more specific. I had vagueness in my writing when I was trying to describe a … [Read more…]
