My revision strategy I chose is the creating a web of and establishing the two sides of my draft. I connected key parts of the essay to other sub categories. I made sure to get down the ones I knew and then after, I made sure to incorporate other ideas I could put into my paper to make sure it had a lot of ideas and that it could flow well with the readings I read. This can be very helpful in a science class when framing out what I want to say in my scientific papers. I can have each section of my paper be a topic and I can branch off of each are saying what I want to write or what I want to incorporate in may paper. This will be good way of getting my paper started and hitting all of my points and then after a draft, I can se what else I should talk about and incorporate it in a chosen category.
